Sunday, January 4, 2009

Waiting Comments

Rating: 3.5

Waiting


Sparkling ripples on the water
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Meggie Gultiano
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Miriam Maia Padua 20 January 2009

sweet...sweet...sweet writes.... so lovely..patiently waiting for someone..... very touching....bring lightness to my heart lines sweetly flows.... like a breeze of love caressing one's heart.. anyone you reads your piece will surely feel...10+++++ my friend

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 18 January 2009

Imageful write, young lass...Smooth to the eyes & poetic senses....Meggie...you never disappoint! F j R 2009

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Vaibhav Pandey 18 January 2009

nice and flowing piece.. I wishyour wait stops forever.

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 17 January 2009

a long patient wait along with nature...lovely 10

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This poem is like a song calling love to you. We all have to wait sometimes and I could relate to your flowing words. Well written Meggie. Karin Anderson

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Thad Wilk 04 January 2009

A lovely and touching poem Meggie, melancholy - an sweet ! *10*! ! Best wishes! Friend Thad

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C T Heart 04 January 2009

The imagery used was great, finely crafted with zeal.

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Fiona Davidson 04 January 2009

What a lovely evocative piece this is Meggie...thank you so much for sharing it with us....Fi

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