Tuesday, November 18, 2008

Waiting Comments

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Arrival on time, waiting for hours, custody dealt with first.
The docket full to overflowing, the impatience palatable.
Time sluggishly passing, discontent floats like a miasma, through the throng of humanity.
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Judith DaviesWebb
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nice work.. great poem...

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 19 November 2008

Very compact and all these within 100 yards! ! An imaginative writes right down to the wire.Nice writes Judith.Keep up the good works.

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Joseph Poewhit 18 November 2008

Got flashes of images from the poem

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