Monday, August 18, 2008

Waiting Comments

Rating: 5.0

What a fool I must be
how much will it take to make me see
how much more changes do you need
how many more excuses will I make,
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Sophonie Asia Joseph
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Rico Avila 22 January 2009

Nice poem. waiting... may be all you can do. Unless you want to destroy the love he has for her.

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Tyrone Wingfield 08 October 2008

Your poem was amazing, i may not of been writting long but ive been reading poems as long as i can remember and every voice in my head is agreeing that you are a spectactular poet

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Ency Bearis 18 August 2008

if there is a way, there is a will..probably love will be recognized the way it is being expressed like this...nice concept with full deliverance...nicely written Ency Bearis

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Patrick Oswald 18 August 2008

You have tallent, I have just started to write myself, so I do not really know what to say in order to critque... However I like what I have read.

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Joseph Poewhit 18 August 2008

Has some real basic - HONESTY

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