Waiting Comments

Nice poem. waiting... may be all you can do. Unless you want to destroy the love he has for her.

Your poem was amazing, i may not of been writting long but ive been reading poems as long as i can remember and every voice in my head is agreeing that you are a spectactular poet

if there is a way, there is a will..probably love will be recognized the way it is being expressed like this...nice concept with full deliverance...nicely written Ency Bearis

You have tallent, I have just started to write myself, so I do not really know what to say in order to critque... However I like what I have read.

Has some real basic - HONESTY