Sunday, January 8, 2012

Wait Till The End Of My Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sitting alone,
No I didn't know you would leave,
It seems like yesterday you left me,
I open my eyes and see that is been half a year,
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Ala elouri
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Roseann Shawiak 07 June 2016

Wow! Very intense and emotional poem filled with pain and hurt another has stricken you with! Brutally honest words of what life is like without love being returned, just abandoned and leaving a person alone to deal with it. How utterly cruel, how can another human being treat one like this. Thank you for sharing your heartfelt truth. RoseAnn

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