Friday, August 10, 2007

Wait, My Soldier Boy Comments

Rating: 5.0

One day and counting
It spans more than twenty four
Ive only now just left you
But now im back and wanting more
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Fallen Too Far
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Scarlett Treat 10 August 2007

I agree with Colin J here...that second stanze is a doozie! Liked the whole poem.

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Colin J... 10 August 2007

Captured by a hanging clock... You have caught that moment... lovely poem, Colin J...

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Fallen Too Far

Fallen Too Far

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