Friday, March 16, 2007

Wait For The World, I Comments

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night waits for the last eye of a house
to close, that last light in a room to darken
but no more, I sit up, wait for dawn
wait for the street sweeper to pass Main
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Ben Partenay
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Goldy Locks 01 June 2007

lithesome poetry, Ben.

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S... Che 20 April 2007

A very Nice poem: -) I like it

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S... Che 20 April 2007

Nice poem: -) I like it

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Ivan Donn Carswell 16 March 2007

I'm waiting for the plug too, the plug that powers ON. You're hinting at the next poem already... Great descriptive reflections. Rgds, Ivan

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