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lol like Tiffany said this is Amazing! ! ! ! beautiful :)

this is too good for words.....it left me speechless and u r still an amzing writer! ! ! i hope u dont mind tht i print this off and show it to my friends

words done from true love...........can see the pain n longing care in your lines dark girl.....n the way yu tried to express your pain to the one whom u loved much s awesome.....sebastine....10++.........

We've all been there and felt that. Teriffic job and keep up the good work...Jeff.

i am so touched by this poem.i remember a time where ive felt lke this

This is a very sad and deeply poem Dark girl...the poems I wrote I think that they born the day that the guy I loved betray me and leave me and kiss another girl...I though the wound will never heal, I hated him so much, I wanted to feel the same pain as I... but the time make me feel in love again with other person, and the hate that once feel now is gone, I cant tell you exactly how it vanish... but the time it heals all wounds and one day your heart will heal too =)

It's dark...very vindictive...i like the poem, though the format through me off a little..and the flow was hard to catch..but all in all, I like it....good job. :)

An emotional poem. It happens in teen age love, but soon you will know what really love is....keep on writing. Best Wishes.

Innocent love poem, nicely writin, cute teen age feeling in it like it...

Love can really hurt! ! The pain is felt/ Good job! ! ~~

Whose words if not you lol.Unless you part take in plagiarism.Wow nice words of yours indeed.Yeahh he' ll wait for you dear.

wow.. your last words... very strong meaning behind it.. one whom makes you cry, isnt even worth the sight.. forget and leave behind.. on to better days..

There is a narrow gap in love and hatred. But, hatred is not the solution for betrayal. Try to absorb the reality. Be compassionate. Anyway nicely penned. And 10 to encourage you.