Sunday, October 15, 2017

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Trees are whispering giving breeze,
Branches are bowing with leaves,
Leaves are shaking emotion in light,
Train is passing through level crossing.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Bill Khaki 06 October 2020

Every person should have patience and cross the risky road. You have observed the sequence very minutely. This poem is nice.

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 May 2020

Obeying the rules. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Pushpendra Patel 01 March 2019

Before crossing the train line we should watch rightly. Greatest happiness we get remaining with God. We search for eternal happiness and we get this. God teaches us righteousness. Thank you very much for sharing this. You are a nice poet. This poem is excellent poem.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 16 October 2017

Such a fine poem about patience, Kumarmani.... a highest 10++++

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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 October 2017

I loved reading such a very nice poem carrying precise message to the society.. I quote..'Have patience and watch on more, Road for you will be clear soon, Avoiding danger is clever act dear, Patience gives courage to achieve. An excellent poem, beautiful flow, scintillating rhymes..! Regards

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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