Saturday, July 9, 2011

Wait And Hope Comments

Rating: 5.0

Do your best tormentor, but you shall not win today,
For I recognise your footsteps, and I shall not be your prey,
Your name has been exposed now, and your methods are quite clear,
Your subtle ways of hurting, can no more induce such fear.
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Daniel P Martin
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Stefanie Fontker 10 September 2011

My favourite work of yours so far. Very beautiful work, this is amazing.

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Shadow Girl 03 September 2011

Wow Daniel, this was fantastic..great use of metaphors and imagery to create a flowing verse with meaning.....10

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Andrew Blakemore 01 September 2011

Excellent poetry Daniel, contains a powerful message and very well written.

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Walterrean Salley 23 August 2011

This is absolutely beautiful and powerful. i've been at some of the varied the points alluded to herein, but, by God's grace, am now (today) free. I'm happy for the chance to have read this 'right on' poem. and I thank you for sharing it.

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