Friday, April 25, 2008

Wait And Bleed Comments

Rating: 5.0

I feel confusion all around me,
Locked in this room, I wish to be loved by you,
By the time I reach you, you have chosen,
And the one you have chosen is not me,
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Michael Koelliker
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Tyease Collins 12 June 2008

this has sooo much emotion...like i wanted to just wait and bleed. Nicely written God Bless, **Tyease**

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Adam Holmes 09 June 2008

i agree with the others. the emotion is expressed well. i liked this one. woulda liked it better if I didnt know that you stole the punch line from a slipknot song...lol still good though

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J Baker 12 May 2008

Very well written. Well done

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Aaminah Ottley 01 May 2008

I feel as though I am surrounded by the immeasurable sadness that is able to find relief only through your words. Amazing as usual.

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Tina P 25 April 2008

i love it! you have a talent for expressing real emotion

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Michael Koelliker

Michael Koelliker

Victorville, California
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