Sunday, May 6, 2012

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Rating: 4.5

keeping the window open,
sitting on the sill,
holding pen in lips,
looking at the street end,
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Jahan Zeb
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Nabila ima 02 November 2012

Who you waiting dear? I lke this but make it more longer and express your feeling.

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Persian Khushi 14 October 2012

Beautiful Jahan. contents of your heart poured. very tragic...

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Farah Ilyas 23 May 2012

wait, wait & wait, thats a word have a power to make anyone destitute & deprived, but valour person always faces the hardships &* tribulations of life with patience & great heart, ur loss will not be fulfilled but u r still waiting..really a touching poem..awesome

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Alex Medina 09 May 2012

I know what it's like to lose loved ones. Life moves on, and so should you. ...of course, it's not exactly the easiest thing to do but still. Anywho, great poem!

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Thomas Duncky 06 May 2012

Yet my dear I am waiting.... This poem is great in the sense that it says more than you could write jahan...its so touchng and the last line has all the power to conjure a tear. Nice write but above all straight from the heart. Thank u.

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Jahan Zeb

Jahan Zeb

Malakand Pakistan
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