Saturday, November 1, 2008

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I was confused and my mind wasn't clear,
my soul was preoccupied with strange fears
but now I have decided to wait.........
for how long?
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pallvi sharma
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Rinzu Susan Rajan 11 November 2008

nice usage of rhymes... bfully expressed emotions

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 05 November 2008

Wonderful poem. Loved it. You have expressed the sweet side of longing nicely. Thanks.

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