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woww, , this is very cool, , Love it so much! Wait until the star come, and the sadness invisible, , just thinkin about it make my heart so calm, when I sad, i look at the dark sky, and see the star, that make me better... Thanks for this poem, regards, Naru Kaede, ,

nice and positive poem. liked it very much.

i love the personification touch. Keep it upi

very delicatel and superbly written, throughing out your insight.

I see the darkness... Sad... But very nice ending.. KRista

This is an elegant poem, of sadness that can be washed away. I liked it.

The darkness dimmed and the curtain opened Lightless stars now visible The moist breeze happily blows The sadness now invisible Simply...Great..

A good write Nightingale, after the rain the sun will shine again, very symbolic Lynda xx 10

A beautiful, reassuring lyric. 10 for you. Warm regards, Sandra

Very nice I like it very good poem. Could you please comment some of mine to. Thanks in advance.

hmmmmm..wait! this is a nice write!

Very clean image has been created! fine similitudes too! ....10+

This is a heart felt write, thank you for sharing it with us. Scott

A very lovely and heartfelt poem, which cuddles smoothly to a reassuring end, letting flows of sadness spread till it loses weight upon the mind and heart.10!

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