Wailing Of A Soul Comments

Admired this excellent poem.... humble and praiseworthy expression. Top score.

When I see my world a prison with discord round And no one who seems to care is found When friends desert and never want me again Be my friend to spare me of my gnawing pain! ......so touching. God is real friend who can spare us of our gnawing pain. A beautiful poem with nice prayer is well executed.

Valsa-A reverent, highly revelant prayer.I feel the deep, sincere intensity of of your thoughts..If it was'nt for the lighthouse where would this ship be.Beautiful, throughout

Such a beautiful prayer/ poem. A grieving heart seeks peace and it is found no where but in a heart true to itself seeking mercy of almighty. Thank you Valsa for sharing such lovely poem.m

This is a very beautiful poem. We all have our moments of light and darkness and this poem is so nicely written that it will help many wailing souls to see a bit of light and get some hope, which will in turn get them back in the bright sun in an accelerated way. Losing a loved one can cause so much hurt in our life. Sometimes we just need time to help us turn the bitterness of missing a bit more towards gratefulness of having had. I think life is difficult but at the same time full of beauty. I think you will enjoy one of my latest: Y// Scary Perfect World

We are so blessed! we can bend our knees and ask forgiveness, at whatever time we choose! Thanks for sharing, Valsa!

A prayer before tthe Almighty to navigate our life to the lighthouse when the sea is stormy and sky cloudy.A beautiful poem touching heart.

The work of a blessed soul for all of us to read and feel comforted. Thank you.

Father, lead my life through the raging storm And restore into my life your serene calm You who know me from beginning to end Through trials of life, your care and mercy send! wonderful write, by imagery expressing prayer to Almighty to lead a kindly life, yet sublime...

When I see my world a prison with discord round And no one who seems to care is found When friends desert and never want me again Be my friend to spare me of my gnawing pain! Ameen to this beautiful prayer. May all your wishes be granted.

I love this stunning write with very inspired lines, God guides us through life with his kindness and compassion, thanks for sharing!

it's a beautiful prayer. Touching and powerful.

In times of the troubles of the earth. Nice work.

Father, lead my life through the raging storm And restore into my life your serene calm You who know me from beginning to end Through trials of life, your care and mercy send! A beautiful prayer, Amen!

wow such a nice prayer at the end of the year. Yes God is always with us and His comfort and solace matters to us the most. Great lines with a nice message.

Bending knee i ask for forgiveness and I know about my responsibility of action. You are father God, you can only lead my life very smoothly. Very heart touching prayer poem shared here. Wisely drafted and shared definitely.10

Superb prayer, we are governed by our own good and bad deeds apart from the set fate for every individual, we cannot blame others for our own doings...A thought provoking poem, indeed.10+++

A poem of devotion and sincerity. I like the simple diction and the rhythm it has. it is an appeasing treat to aching hearts. Thanks for sharing.

beginning to end we want mercy sand, beautiful..

A prayer to the Almighty from bottom of heart made by a soul tormented by surroundings and situation prevailing there. As a poem it is very beautiful with rhyme and a steady flow of emotions. Thanks for sharing. Ten++ points.