Wailing Of A Soul Poem by Valsa George

Wailing Of A Soul

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At times I see my life going out of gear
Tempestuous passions take away my cheer
I know there is none to blame but only me
Hence I ask forgiveness as I bend my knee

When resentments clutter up, darkening my mind
My Lord, do not despise but be merciful and kind
Through clouds of doubt and weeds of fear
Let your voice be heard calm and clear!

As the light house navigates the sailors of the sea
Be a beacon in the thickening gloom, guiding me
When breakers rise high to turn and toss my ship
Be my captain to steer it without a slip!

When dear ones from our lives suddenly depart
Send your peace and heal our grieving heart
Teach us to accept Death as a leveler with icy hands
As the desert winds across the heaving sands

When I see my world a prison with discord round
And no one who seems to care is found
When friends desert and never want me again
Be my friend to spare me of my gnawing pain!

Father, lead my life through the raging storm
And restore into my life your serene calm
You who know me from beginning to end
Through trials of life, your care and mercy send!

Wailing Of A Soul
Tuesday, December 29, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Barney 29 December 2015

A very nice poem/prayer. Well done. A ten for sure.

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Clarence Prince 31 December 2015

We are so blessed! we can bend our knees and ask forgiveness, at whatever time we choose! Thanks for sharing, Valsa!

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Bharati Nayak 31 December 2015

A prayer before tthe Almighty to navigate our life to the lighthouse when the sea is stormy and sky cloudy.A beautiful poem touching heart.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 30 December 2015

The work of a blessed soul for all of us to read and feel comforted. Thank you.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 30 December 2015

Father, lead my life through the raging storm And restore into my life your serene calm You who know me from beginning to end Through trials of life, your care and mercy send! wonderful write, by imagery expressing prayer to Almighty to lead a kindly life, yet sublime...

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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 June 2022

Admired this excellent poem.... humble and praiseworthy expression. Top score.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 November 2019

When I see my world a prison with discord round And no one who seems to care is found When friends desert and never want me again Be my friend to spare me of my gnawing pain! ......so touching. God is real friend who can spare us of our gnawing pain. A beautiful poem with nice prayer is well executed.

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Joseph Anderson 19 January 2016

Valsa-A reverent, highly revelant prayer.I feel the deep, sincere intensity of of your thoughts..If it was'nt for the lighthouse where would this ship be.Beautiful, throughout

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Savita Tyagi 02 January 2016

Such a beautiful prayer/ poem. A grieving heart seeks peace and it is found no where but in a heart true to itself seeking mercy of almighty. Thank you Valsa for sharing such lovely poem.m

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Hans Vr 01 January 2016

This is a very beautiful poem. We all have our moments of light and darkness and this poem is so nicely written that it will help many wailing souls to see a bit of light and get some hope, which will in turn get them back in the bright sun in an accelerated way. Losing a loved one can cause so much hurt in our life. Sometimes we just need time to help us turn the bitterness of missing a bit more towards gratefulness of having had. I think life is difficult but at the same time full of beauty. I think you will enjoy one of my latest: Y// Scary Perfect World

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