Tuesday, December 16, 2008

Wailers Wail Comments

Rating: 5.0

In a piece of muscle
so many feelings
has been put
happiness has been put
...
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Asif Baloch
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Sathyanarayana M V S 27 December 2008

Acme of emotions, stunning piece Bhayya/

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Kesav Easwaran 25 December 2008

emotions sad and dark nicely put into this write, Aijaz...10

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Anjali Sinha 16 December 2008

alas! a wailer wails miserably in this way, asif or aijaz as if! chained by force in the darkened prison hey wail not Asif in that dungeons of grief I hear your cry, instead hold head straight and upright for thats what I think Asif is and upholder of all good values a lovely write Asif and certainly this deserves and A+++++ and many 10ssss regards anjali

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*Trusting You* 16 December 2008

I have heard the dying voice in depths silent cry rises in loneliness very cool. I love those lines. yet agian you have done a great job with this my friend. Becca

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