Waheeda Look-Alike Comments

The wry diction plunges us back into the quivering mass of a collegiate youth's heart. It is a telling move to describe him as a pillar, for he himself felt the sting of being so pillar-like. In moments of sympathy for what he was, he replays the soundtrack of youthful reveries. Who is to say that those hours of inchoate longing were not laying groundwork for something? A poet endures great hollowness of soul and so becomes receptive to many things.

We all know time and time waits for none and yet due to hesitation breed from a combination of factors, we often fail to take the plunge. An excellent poem.

There are many look alike around, So much so, that one can easily make mistakes! Nonetheless, this is very pretty; no wonder you are so mindful of her!

Marvellous expresssion. It is an amusing story filled with romantic vibration. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing. ..... 10

Haunting melodies keep on pleasantly haunting for life. Haunting beauties remain burning in the heart. You captured the entire episode hauntingly beautiful. Enjoyed the poem.

Wow.... this is such an entertaining write that has brought a wide smile to my lips! Imagine the present out spoken philosopher being a lover head over heels in love, but lacking the nerve to tell it, waiting sheepishly at the college gate to have a look at Waheeda's 'duplicate! I know much of it is fancy, especially the note part! However you have beautifully and humorously presented that shipboard romance! A sure 10

this is such a cute poem. and i see the honesty in this poem. I feel it is always better to have loved and lost than not to have loved at all. (before marriage of course!) i find this exciting too. Imagine that you suddenly meet her across the street.. what will you do now? will you find her old and haggard? will you still be stupid? will you be stupid to be brave to go and talk to her? ? ? well Romantic too....... Did you study at all? ? ? ?

Wonderful. He who hesitates, loses.