Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Toowoomba, Queensland, Australia. Resides in Adelaide
Wednesday, August 12, 2015

Wages And Surveillance Comments

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You feel there's a connect
between our tolerances
of wage disparities and increasing surveillance
and want to find it
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Douglas Scotney
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Bri Edwards 19 August 2015

does anyone besides me (AND THE POET) notice a little rhyming in the last stanza.. i REALLY believe i DID notice it before writing my first great comment, but [i'm old] i guess i forgot about the rhyming i'd read. yes, daddy would be proud of Douglas, a true poet (if one looks hard enough!) . hee hee but seriously, i have read some fine poems which have had NO rhyming. but i'm just a rhyming fool in my poems; it truly seems to help me compose, and quickly. bri :)

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Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Toowoomba, Queensland, Australia. Resides in Adelaide
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