Monday, March 16, 2020

Wag Your Mind's Tail And Bliss Would Sail Comments

Rating: 5.0

Ah what a doggie this,
Always in a joyous bliss,
I know, how he wags his tail,
Happiness sets when a sail.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Anjandev Roy 16 March 2020

mind's tail.........significant. anjandev roy.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 March 2020

Let him start wagging mind's tail/And the breeze of bliss would sail/And that killjoy in mood grey/ Let not ego come in way....I admire this prudent poetic expression sir! A fabulous quatrain......10/10

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Aniruddha Pathak

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