Thursday, December 3, 2009

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I tried to cry, but I couldn't feel it,
I tried to lie, but I couldnt fake it,
I tried to fight, but I couldnt make it,
I tried to die.
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David Sabo
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Rachel Ellard 22 December 2009

for real, for real, check me out, i keep it real....love this!

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Danny H 21 December 2009

your words are never of proper gramar and thats the best part its you, your words, your heart on paper Breaking down mentally Breaking me physically Sickest of memories Breaking me instanly everyone in a sick slight of mind knows these feelings but we can conquer them and be strong again even in a moment of weakness

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Marie Bliss 21 December 2009

Another brilliant poem david. May you never lose touch with how you feel. Marie x

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