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I love these Latinate words in English. The two you chose add their gravitas to the poem and cinch the argument that there are two kinds of reality, the occluded and the transparent (more Latinate words!) . I can't send you a message so I'll piggy-back here. I appreciate your appreciation - your comments went to the beating heart of my poems. BTW I too like THE PRODIGAL SON poem; it was quite spontaneous and I enjoyed discovering the storyline as I wrote. I'm going to take your suggestion to turn some of my poems into monologues. It's an inspired idea!