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this is how we can be with people when they are lonely. U could say 'we' instead of 'I'. this pluarality could give ur poem a bigger force of expression. To help the distressed is good, but to develop their self sufficiency is better. Let us give people courage and hope when they are alone and in need of such assistance. U have expressed the idea very well. poetic, artistic and lovely poem...Tanvi.carry on dear. Ratan

Amazing poem, i like it...though words are out of reality.

Tanvi, very beautiful poem, very reassuring for the one you love......... Cheers, Anil

this is how youthful exuberance should be spread around!

a Godly gift! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! . CP

Last line is worth a million beyond