Tuesday, April 8, 2008

Vultures Be Gone Comments

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Strip the flesh off the bone
pull it off, pull it off! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
A tug of war, tearing at your face.
They fly in circle, and sweep in for the kill
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Justin Henry
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Amber Glistener 18 March 2012

oh my lord you've done it!

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Greenwolfe 1962 30 June 2008

This one is more clear, but I see so much missing that I can't fully enjoy the poem or prose as it is. Itis a good creative idea but it needs to be developed more. GW62

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Shaun William Hayes 05 May 2008

another powerful piece, are you truly 15 or 16, if so you write with great animism, keep it up.

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