Strip the flesh off the bone
pull it off, pull it off! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
A tug of war, tearing at your face.
They fly in circle, and sweep in for the kill
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This one is more clear, but I see so much missing that I can't fully enjoy the poem or prose as it is. Itis a good creative idea but it needs to be developed more. GW62
another powerful piece, are you truly 15 or 16, if so you write with great animism, keep it up.
oh my lord you've done it!