Vultures Be Gone Comments
Strip the flesh off the bone
pull it off, pull it off! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
A tug of war, tearing at your face.
They fly in circle, and sweep in for the kill
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This one is more clear, but I see so much missing that I can't fully enjoy the poem or prose as it is. Itis a good creative idea but it needs to be developed more. GW62
another powerful piece, are you truly 15 or 16, if so you write with great animism, keep it up.
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7/26/2025 12:32:41 AM # 1.0.0
oh my lord you've done it!