Vulnerable Predator Comments

oooh, i like this one.... your hands could be softer if you didn't clasp..... i like how you have this whole imagery thing going on, you're poems are really strong, they're very good... :)

Predators are vulnerable coz they are attacking species.They have no other choice than vengeance preying their stray souls.A good write of them here.Winds of African Sahara and Indian Sunderbans rendezvous with your ideas.

This is a powerful piece of writing Stefanie..Brilliant ending where you compare the predator to a vulnerable victim.