Monday, September 25, 2006

Vulnerable (A Haiku) Comments

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A slight gasp of air
Blows flickering candles out
How vulnerable!
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asma bahrainwala
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Jibin Joseph 25 December 2007

beautiful................ great write

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Preeti - is here! 18 January 2007

how beautiful! You really write well yaar!

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Reuben Matthew 06 November 2006

a beautiful expression. Reuben.

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Nalini Hebbar 25 September 2006

this one is good too...asma...great write

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John Tiong Chunghoo 25 September 2006

in a second the room was darkened the candle lost its eyes - us

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Vallerie Lobell 25 September 2006

I really enjoyed this...I remember the watching the winds of Hurricane Katrina blow..and the darkness that followed....thanks Vallerie

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