Saturday, April 7, 2007

Voyeur? Comments

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I saw an old chap
standing under a stairwell
gazing up at mini-skirted girls
walking up, or down.
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jerry hughes
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Francis Duggan 09 January 2008

Very clever poem you have written here Jerry it should never be seen as a crime to have a peek one suppose, like; tis said 'a woman is as old as she looks and a man is old when he stops looking' great work

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Alison Cassidy 08 April 2007

This is such a gentle understanding piece about love and ageing and an appreciation of beauty. The last line especially is very filled with sweet irony. I remember being one of those silly girls.... love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxx

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