Voyage Poem by Sandra Feldman

Voyage

Rating: 5.0


Loneliness,
In search of serenity
Rest and trust,
A place pure, to nest
Your lonely heart.

A place, quiete and soft
Safe, warm and sound
A hiding place you can
Trust,
Like the roots of trees
Trust the ground
That holds them firmly,
Safe and sound.

One day we may find that
Holy ground!
Where one can rest from
The turmoil of this Life
We did not choose,
And all its noise and
Useless, warlike sounds.

As peace is found.
Among the life bearing
Only, holy trees
That hug the ground...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 03 September 2021

A meaningful poem so beautifully conceived and expressed. To my Poem List

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 03 September 2021

Yes, peace will come at the end. The evils will have no course but to vanish into darkness.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 03 September 2021

Yes, there will be a time when the evil will go to the realm of nothingness where he can rest his claws. And that day we will find our holy ground.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 03 September 2021

Beautiful, heartwarming and uplifting poem. Wonderful thoughts that sooth the spirit.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 03 September 2021

For the holy trees that hug the ground- fullest and brightest stars

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Sandra Feldman 04 September 2021

However in a way we have gone together thru our poems and our sharing of thought thru them, together.. Thank you all for your wonderful comments! Brought me magnum contentment! Be Blessed.

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Sandra Feldman 04 September 2021

I know that if we could, all you wonderful poet friends and I would go on this serenity search voyage together. However in a way we have

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M Asim Nehal 04 September 2021

Soothing poem. The soul is in solace now. Great 5*****

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 03 September 2021

Cont... The system consistently aborts the flow of words and thoughts

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 03 September 2021

Typo... Please read the word sooth as soothe....It is almost impossible to give comments on poems.

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