I did not change, I'm just grown.
I did not lost my past, i only adding present my new one.
I'm in charge for my life revolution,
But im not responsible for others' doubt.
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I liked this, the truth of integrity, belief in the life path chosen. It reminds me of a quote I think I can remember correctly. " This above all else, to thy own soul be true, and it must follow, as the night the day, thou canst then be false to no man." The term man is no longer politically correct, sadly I think integrity is often no longer politically correct.
Yiyan, i appreciate your kind words, its warming..thank you my friend. Happy new year
Terrific verse, Soul. The last two lines especially highlight the condition of the writer, the philosopher, the artist. Often those capable of truly hearing the meaning behind the words are limited to numbers of all too few. Brilliant verse!
Never saying bad words to my humble work. thats soo kind and nice of u MJ
Your travels have been sound not changing in aging. Wisdom has been with you.
Apt title " Voyage" to a lovely poem. Change is must but some changes are not good either with age or with circumstances that is the goodness in us. A very thoughtful poem on the subject.10***
Dear Asim, i always thankful for you always reading my work. Though it not much i can offer but your support is amazing! I have a great voyage in life with great people like u. Thanks God
A wonderful self reflection, Soul. I love your art. It is so meaningful and the thoughts expressed are enriching
Ahh that is really kind. Thanks Hans. Have a good time... end of 2020
My mind speaks for whom understand The rest may say I'm just mumbling....this is signature piece. Very well concieved and aptly present. Let those who understands may understand rest keep grumbling noting I'd going to harm all is going to work good. Thank-you.
A difference between changing and growing is discussed. A poem of an individual being, a living one, I should say. Otherwise or in other aspects, is there a change... in this tiny dot or in this huge universe. Let me think :)
Hi Ali, beautiful thought....any addition after what you think