Sunday, October 18, 2020

Voyage Comments

Rating: 5.0

I did not change, I'm just grown.
I did not lost my past, i only adding present my new one.
I'm in charge for my life revolution,
But im not responsible for others' doubt.
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Unwritten Soul
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Muhammad Ali 07 December 2020

A difference between changing and growing is discussed. A poem of an individual being, a living one, I should say. Otherwise or in other aspects, is there a change... in this tiny dot or in this huge universe. Let me think :)

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Unwritten Soul 27 December 2020

Hi Ali, beautiful thought....any addition after what you think

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Terry Craddock 23 October 2020

I liked this, the truth of integrity, belief in the life path chosen. It reminds me of a quote I think I can remember correctly. " This above all else, to thy own soul be true, and it must follow, as the night the day, thou canst then be false to no man." The term man is no longer politically correct, sadly I think integrity is often no longer politically correct.

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Unwritten Soul 27 December 2020

Terry, your view widen the scene. Thank you for that!

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Yiyan Han 22 October 2020

each human voyage is unique so yours is special as well - 5*

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Unwritten Soul 27 December 2020

Yiyan, i appreciate your kind words, its warming..thank you my friend. Happy new year

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Mj Lemon 20 October 2020

Terrific verse, Soul. The last two lines especially highlight the condition of the writer, the philosopher, the artist. Often those capable of truly hearing the meaning behind the words are limited to numbers of all too few. Brilliant verse!

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Unwritten Soul 27 December 2020

Never saying bad words to my humble work. thats soo kind and nice of u MJ

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Lyn Paul 18 October 2020

Your travels have been sound not changing in aging. Wisdom has been with you.

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Unwritten Soul 27 December 2020

Always kind and always you. So thankful for u

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M Asim Nehal 18 October 2020

Apt title " Voyage" to a lovely poem. Change is must but some changes are not good either with age or with circumstances that is the goodness in us. A very thoughtful poem on the subject.10***

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Unwritten Soul 27 December 2020

Dear Asim, i always thankful for you always reading my work. Though it not much i can offer but your support is amazing! I have a great voyage in life with great people like u. Thanks God

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Hans Vr 18 October 2020

A wonderful self reflection, Soul. I love your art. It is so meaningful and the thoughts expressed are enriching

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Unwritten Soul 27 December 2020

Ahh that is really kind. Thanks Hans. Have a good time... end of 2020

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Varsha M 18 October 2020

My mind speaks for whom understand The rest may say I'm just mumbling....this is signature piece. Very well concieved and aptly present. Let those who understands may understand rest keep grumbling noting I'd going to harm all is going to work good. Thank-you.

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