Saturday, March 24, 2012

Vowing, To Be Better! Comments

Rating: 5.0

i am both the bullet,
and the victim.
the finger on the trigger,
the hand on the heart.
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Eric Cockrell
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Kevin Patrick 25 March 2012

This is fast and furious, Love reading it out loud, everyone of us has an angel and daemon but as long as we work on it every day we'll get through and find our path. Last two line should be lived by everyone

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Dave Walker 25 March 2012

A great poem, we should all take a look at ourselves every now and then, just to make sure we are who we Think we are. A great write.

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