Monday, October 8, 2012

Vow (The Leap) Comments

Rating: 4.5

If you cry, I'll cry
crocodile tears, my fears
if you lie, I'll believe
try so I may see
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Kelvin Owusu
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Stevens Cadet 15 October 2012

Love this, you inspired a new piece of mine. Good poem, good read.... Couldn't even finish it initially cause you sparked so many thoughts

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Nader Baheri 10 October 2012

nice and sad. mucha gracias for sharing

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Anita Sehgal 10 October 2012

a very sweet poem... trust and love.. good read

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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 09 October 2012

Very entertaining, Kelvin, with a very positive outlook in look. Nice if more and more people could have this kind of attitude! Thanks for sharing!

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Ruth Fumble 09 October 2012

Awwwwwww this is so sweeeeeet :) i love it.. nice one my friend :)

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Stevie Taite 09 October 2012

I especially like the first stanza! It is full of readiness to read a true emotion! X

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 08 October 2012

A lovely emotional piece. You show that how lovely your emotions will come on the paper with your words Good one. i love it.

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Kelvin Owusu

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