Monday, November 29, 2021

Vow Comments

Rating: 4.0

They say I'm crazy
But I say they lazy
I made myself a vow
That they would one day bow
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Fatuma Abdi
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Kirby Wright 02 December 2021

I'd avoid end rhymes like the plague, if you want any recognition as a poet

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Chinedu Dike 01 December 2021

Well articuated and nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched....

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