Votive Mournings Comments

Hey, Smoky. There are a number of lines in this that strike me as lovely. The first to get my attention was living is the real story behind the visible. This poem has the feel of a melancholy rhapsody. -Glen

O' morning- are you mourning? death angel? undertaker? bier? shrouded coffin? pallbearer? grave yard? Look- I see the shining of sun, breeze, chirping birds, rhythm of practicing music, proactive stream of river, the flying snow white cloud on the blue sky everything but O' morning I do not find myself You O' morning, you snatches my soul................!

Such a marvelous write, Smoky...............10+++++++++++++