Thursday, October 16, 2014

Vortex Comments

Rating: 5.0

Whisper to myself
'I'
and my soul will fly
gazing upon
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Elena Sandu
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Amitava Sur 05 December 2014

A beautiful feeling of self as how the soul is remaining within so closely and churning like a vortex.

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Ramesh Rai 28 October 2014

Short sweet and beautiful

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* Sunprincess * 20 October 2014

..........perfect title for this poem....love is like a vortex is very imaginative....

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 20 October 2014

Fantastic I and you I stood for self love that is within and you stood for you my love is for you and your love is for me..love rolls like that thank you

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