Wednesday, June 9, 2010

Vomit In Your Half Filled Cup Comments

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If love was in the air
you have taken my last breath
not only causing heart ache
but a sevre fatal death
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Dakota Ellerton
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'Vomit in your half filled cup'... I know what it's meant to express, but I simply can't stop chuckling when I read it... I'm not being sarcastic; I think it highlights the contrast between the mood of your write and the possibly opposite reaction of people who read it...

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