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Listen darnit and listen hard!
Catch the echo in the room bouncing off walls
Echo so heavy, it weighs on your thoughts and feelings
The echoes of human struggle and disparity amongst peoples
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Good work, David. Giving a bit of our time (or a lot of our time) to the needy, is so different from giving money. Giving money to charity does often not really affect us in a big way but givng time, oh yes, changes our perspective, transforms our lives and that of others and allows us to discover our and other's potential.
Beautiful. The subject is so true, and can bring out the emotions in all of us. Whatever you give to the world, you receive back at some other time. And if we volunteer and help other people when they need it, we are surely never going to be alone next time we're in need of help. Anyway, it's a truly amazing poem (: the word choice is amazing. Keep up the good work and keep on writing my friend!
i like. its a jungle out there may be today for me and tomorrow for you the key is team work and love. a helping hand from a friend some times is all many ask for
... Still cant figure why u titled it so. I would hav titled it 'THE CRY OF A THOUSAND VOICE. or echos of the dust or something like that'. but I most say, tis was a good work. I guess ur language skill comes from ur environment.
... Still cant figure why u titled it so. I would hav titled it 'THE CRY OF A THOUSAND VOICE. or echos of the dust or something like that'. but I most say, tis was a good work. I guess ur language skill comes from ur environment.
It is very well done. There are some grammatical errors, but overall I found this absolutely brilliant. Great message, keep writing.
Great insight into the soul. Your words can not help but to awaken dormit compassion in those who are not lost in their own narcissism. Enjoyed this work, is an inspiration. If you desire, check out my poem hopscotch into my soul
More people need to pay attention to those in need.
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7/28/2025 6:34:16 AM # 1.0.0
Not many voulnteer but those that do... make a differance in this jungle we call earth. Your poem set my mind reeling and that is always a good thing