Saturday, July 18, 2009

Volition System Comments

Rating: 5.0

It burns my domesticity!

There are restless clouds in the boat- journey.
That girl returns after selling self,
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Braja K Sarkar
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 02 January 2010

U turn at the end and …it’s the poetic twist... Cheers you’ve brought blooming beauty Dame Cleopatra And for 1 eyed deer 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Catrina Heart 22 August 2009

such an interesting unique theme.............................10+++

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Anjali Sinha 18 July 2009

The Nile flows Cleopatra dives and the deer runs his hermetic seal whatever another great write from you -the expert -10 anjali

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meaningful writing..very softly penned

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Braja K Sarkar

Braja K Sarkar

Calcutta, India
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