Thursday, March 8, 2012

Volcano Comments

Rating: 4.2

Seething cauldron, an inferno
belching noxious vapours
spewing red hot molten lava
spilling down mountainside
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Valerie Dohren
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kepyas 24 November 2019

Titi ka okeh kayo lameh ㅏㅁ 휘

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Dave Walker 07 December 2012

A short and powerful poem. Like it.

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Valsa George 20 June 2012

Very true! unkind words can burn like the sulphrous lava from a volcano!

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Smoky Hoss 18 March 2012

Your way of morphing natural occurences into human emotions is excellent. Stunning even.

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Frank Acquafredda 11 March 2012

nice, i liked it...i will def check out a few more. i am new to the site, but i like what i see so far

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Neela Nath Das 09 March 2012

Strong.Diction praiseworthy.

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Robert Green 09 March 2012

Great poem again Val :)

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Micmac Mccrory 08 March 2012

Waterfall and Volcano two straight to the point poems. I like the way you write.

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