Seething cauldron, an inferno
belching noxious vapours
spewing red hot molten lava
spilling down mountainside
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Very true! unkind words can burn like the sulphrous lava from a volcano!
Your way of morphing natural occurences into human emotions is excellent. Stunning even.
nice, i liked it...i will def check out a few more. i am new to the site, but i like what i see so far
Waterfall and Volcano two straight to the point poems. I like the way you write.
Titi ka okeh kayo lameh ㅏㅁ 휘