Monday, June 1, 2009
Volcanic Extinction Comments
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Volcanic Extinction
My life, a dormant volcano, lies in wait,
Beneath the surface, emotions accumulate.
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Bri Edwards
18 April 2019
i prefer other poems of yours which have the stanza-form, unlike this one which does not. also, perhaps you 'wanted' " dissolve" , not " dissolved" in last line? ? bri :)
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7/29/2025 3:43:58 AM # 1.0.0
the submission dates for your poems seem to indicate you did not submit any for 'many' years after this one. i'm 'glad' you've returned. i guess you avoided the lava, OR recovered from your too-hot experience(s) . :) bri