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A child clutches at her father's finger,
Her hands held firmly by her mother.
A woman wants her man's ardent arms
Wrap her in strength and loving charms.
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Khairul Ahsan
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Edward Kofi Louis 16 May 2018

Bonds of Love! Complete satisfaction. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Khairul Ahsan 09 June 2020

My pleasure to share my poems with all the readers of this poetry site, EKL.

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Dr. Yahya 10 May 2017

A very impressive and heart touching poem. Thanks

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Khairul Ahsan 09 June 2020

I am much inspired by your appreciative comment, Dr. Yahya.

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Susan Williams 01 May 2017

A child clutches at her father's finger, Her hands held firmly by her mother. The eternal lament of loving parents- - - we raise them to be good responsible adults and then we sob when they leave the nest! ! ! We humans are contrary creatures! ! Well-written poem here. Enjoyed the read very much.

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Khairul Ahsan 08 June 2020

@Susan Williams, Thank you so much for commenting on my poem. You have rightly said that 'we raise them to be good responsible adults and then we sob when they leave the nest! ' - Yes, indeed, and that's the 'eternal lament of loving parents'. Much inspired by your reading and appreciating, dear poet.

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