Saturday, July 6, 2019

Void Comments

Rating: 5.0

I try to fill the void
but it is too deep
restless are my nights
memories make me weep
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Aqua Flower
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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 August 2022

Days are so long oh where now, where where do I belong? Fantastic expression! Top score for this wonderful poem.

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Jane Campion 06 July 2019

A feeling of hopelessness that is the pits.

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Carl Roussell 06 July 2019

The last four lines say it all, powerful writing!

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