Void Poem by Aqua Flower

Void

Rating: 5.0


I try to fill the void
but it is too deep
restless are my nights
memories make me weep
Days are so long
oh where now, where
where do I belong
too many options
should I go left or right
is right right?
why does all of this feel wrong
Was I counting on a different song
my heart lays empty
where do I belong
dormant it stays
hard nights and harder days
this void, this void
I cannot fill its shell
I thought I see heaven
but instead I see hell

Copyright @ Aqua Flower

Saturday, July 6, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: void
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A dramatic piece describing the feeling of nothingness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 13 August 2022

Days are so long oh where now, where where do I belong? Fantastic expression! Top score for this wonderful poem.

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Jane Campion 06 July 2019

A feeling of hopelessness that is the pits.

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Carl Roussell 06 July 2019

The last four lines say it all, powerful writing!

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