Tuesday, June 10, 2014

Void Comments

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I reach out my hand.
To feel the clouded emptiness.
And grasp the clefts of a void.
Fighting struggling and writhing in pain.
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Rishi Kaul
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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 10 June 2014

What a wonderful way to look at life spiritually! We all behave his way, to a great extent. Its well written. Please keep up.

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Akhtar Jawad 10 June 2014

Rishi, it's a great poem. Following lines are outstanding. Only to realize. That what I lost on the way...was LIFE! ! !

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