Thursday, May 24, 2012

Void..! ! Comments

Rating: 5.0

From the window of my house…
I saw a monkey as cute as a mouse…
Scratching the scalp of his son…
After cuckoo who wished to run…
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Pooja Karnani
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Utsav Patel 02 January 2013

Lovely poem... I just love it...

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Micah Ogberhie 12 July 2012

Pooja, this is a beautifully written poem, trust me. whatever gave you the inspiration is unbeknowst to me, but you did great. would have rather expected a different title, not VOID. it tells a beautiful story of how 'some' of us extract strength & determination to live life to the lees no matter our chequered past...hmm more grill to your mill.

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well ur poems are good but some where or the other the rhyme is missing if u can read my poems then u will click some more ideas

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Sharad Juneja 31 May 2012

Another heart touching .... poem... u know how to play the strings

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Ratnakar Mandlik 25 May 2012

Wondweful observations translated into a beautiful poem.

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Anil Kumar Panda 24 May 2012

awww...you have created a master piece here.simple and beautiful and with a message.loved it.

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Lady Keva 24 May 2012

Nice. Even though its about animals humans can relate 2 it as well.

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