Monday, April 9, 2012

Void Comments

Rating: 5.0

Through the grey walls and white sheets
Void spreads out
It moves in open circling the snow covered mountain peaks
Settles upon the shadowy darkness of cedar and pine
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Savita Tyagi
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Bipasha D 07 December 2017

The word Void is commonly given a negative connotation. But you have presented another meaning too. Void as in unmanifest. Superb poem.

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Mark Dillon 29 August 2012

nothing like the void we feel when we lose someone dear, great poem

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Neela Nath Das 09 April 2012

A sense of nothingness is here in this poem.Great!

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