Thursday, September 29, 2011

Void Comments

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I need to fill this void, Abysmal it seems,
So empty, I can never reach the light as it beams,
Taunting and teasing me,
dancing light flying around,
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Tindel Drey 30 September 2011

nice one. looks like a fellow gradually drifting into unconsciousness or getting high on drugs or alcohol.

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Geoffrey Ngoima Ndegwa. 30 September 2011

Uh, man, where do i start? There is sumthing about your this poem that rings so loud in my soul... I think you were meant for this piece

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