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Dead at birth,
end 'fore beginning.
Is there pain felt at the end of a smile?
Feel my soul wandering place to place,
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Simiwuna John lodam
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Marcus Mckinley 05 August 2010

facing your fears and even embracing death. this a very deep poem.

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Malaya Roses 02 August 2010

Life is a journey and our existence depands on our act and our words; but can we walk the talk? ? ? ? Life is a concept where most of the questions asked, getting diiferent reply & point of view not same at all times. FAITH and belief are our guidence and if the right path being taken, we shall reach the purpose of our existance and suffering that we have to go thru since beginning. Good Poem

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Embrace me, and I in return...breaks the void. Good expression and imagery portrayed here. Well done.; D

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Aldo Kraas 30 July 2010

This poem is almost like a song. I love the construction of this poem

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David Beckham 30 July 2010

Really deep the opening lines. Heavy on emotions and expressions. There is a continuing pursue of the notion of death, in the lines...'Tides and cloud, come and go. And So shall all: ....There is also a feeling of companionship that i like at the end of it. 'Embrace me and I in return' Good! !

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