Wednesday, February 27, 2008

Void Comments

Rating: 5.0

The void in my heart engulfs my being in its soft grey clouds and bleak light of hope dims even further..
I look around and the life suddenly seems like a neverending drama, where i am still waiting to play my role,
I am waiting since eternity and this plays still goes on,
people come, act and go, they push me and pass by and i just wait till i come again in a new costume to play it all over again...
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Richa Tiwari Joshi
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rohit sapra 02 March 2008

In my view this poem is really very good and poetic too as no poem is complete without sadness and happiness. These two combinations always help in formation of a great poem. Nice poem to read.

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