My life's messed up
And no one knows
The misery behind my woes.
They try to see
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Forgetting and a certain longing to return inside setting free such nice words..thank you..iip
i love ths poem it is written with such a passion and true emotion well done!
I'm the demon of blood and I'll rate this 8 out of 10 its good but you can do better find your inner darkness and release it into the minds of these happy people put them all into a dark depression
Amazing.... u have a pretty nice way to send your message to the reader.... i like it! ! ! ! Although i agree with kevin: ' you could do better! ! ^_^ ' anyway... keep up the good work! ! !