Monday, July 7, 2008

! ! ! Voices Over The Black Board! ! ! Comments

Rating: 4.4

the pangs of pan freckled
being thrusted by the rage of fire
out of uncertainty of the time
still in dark side of unknown
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Dr subhendu kar
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Vidyadhar Durgekar 19 July 2008

Another good poem...............

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Linda Weischedel 14 July 2008

This is my favorite part Doc hovering across the void vastness of the sky expanded twitchy bird flies in quest of breath keeping all its earthly desire hotshot Good job, Linda

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Tsira Goge 09 July 2008

folding across its flapping wings storm may come on its way flecking all its bated fear along by the heath of each speckle of hope/// ........................................................ ....It is perfectly made. It is remarkable poems though the grief triumphs... 10... Sincerely, Tsira

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Bianca J. Walker 08 July 2008

This is a very thought provoking piece. You used great imagery here.

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Seema Chowdhury 08 July 2008

wow a very nice poem, thought provoking and full of messages in each line.

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Thad Wilk 07 July 2008

A wonderful poem of life, it carries a message of hope the tomorrows! *10*! ! Best wishes Dr. Kar! Friend Thad

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