! ! ! Voices Over The Black Board! ! ! Comments

Another good poem...............

This is my favorite part Doc hovering across the void vastness of the sky expanded twitchy bird flies in quest of breath keeping all its earthly desire hotshot Good job, Linda

folding across its flapping wings storm may come on its way flecking all its bated fear along by the heath of each speckle of hope/// ........................................................ ....It is perfectly made. It is remarkable poems though the grief triumphs... 10... Sincerely, Tsira

This is a very thought provoking piece. You used great imagery here.

wow a very nice poem, thought provoking and full of messages in each line.

A wonderful poem of life, it carries a message of hope the tomorrows! *10*! ! Best wishes Dr. Kar! Friend Thad