It is how we are and who we are
that we live out here on the edge
the ragged rim of the world
It’s the nature of our vice
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I love that line too Bill! It's tough being a sad pathetic, fringe poet, but I love it. 10 from Tai, with a certain look in her eye! lol
Excellent. I especially like the lines, 'for unless we share our souls there is but dust in what we do'... very well done. Warmest regards, CJ
I really like this. I'm trying to write a poem on isolation myself and found this to be clear and effective. Two attributes my poetry seems to lack. And I'm really working on it. Thanks for this. :)